… a poppy blooms …
haiku for healing : katsushika hokusai : a poppy blooms …
…
I write, erase, rewrite
erase again, and then
a poppy blooms
…
The above is a famous haiku but, although it is lovely, it is wrong. The 5 / 7 / 5 syllables have not been followed. Therefore, I have rewritten it. The word ‘precious’ could be replaced with many other appropriate words.
haiku for healing : a poppy blooms rewrite …
…
write, erase, rewrite
erase again, and then a
precious poppy blooms
…
fragmented.ME xXx
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